Thursday, June 17, 2010

WALT: Use paragraphs in our writing

Marge has hair as blue as the sky on a clear sunny day. Her bright yellow skin glissons in the sun light. The gleaming white pearls shine around her neck every where she goes.

Marge is a bright bubbly person. She is obbsesed with keeping her house neat and tidy.

She has three kids called Lisa, Bart, Maggie she also has a husband called Homer. Marge loves making her family a big breakfast which includes pancakes with a runny maple syrup sauce and plates of huge square waffles covered in chocolate sauce with huge glasses orange juice.

Marge has many diffrent jobs in her life which includes a police officer, teacher, and real esate agent.

Her husband Homer makes Marge do everything for him like make his breakfast do his washing and many more.

She also has to drag Homer away from the Moes each night

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