WALT: Use paragraphs in our writing

Marge has hair as blue as the sky on a clear sunny day. Her bright yellow skin glissons in the sun light. The gleaming white pearls shine around her neck every where she goes.

Marge is a bright bubbly person. She is obbsesed with keeping her house neat and tidy.

She has three kids called Lisa, Bart, Maggie she also has a husband called Homer. Marge loves making her family a big breakfast which includes pancakes with a runny maple syrup sauce and plates of huge square waffles covered in chocolate sauce with huge glasses orange juice.

Marge has many diffrent jobs in her life which includes a police officer, teacher, and real esate agent.

Her husband Homer makes Marge do everything for him like make his breakfast do his washing and many more.

She also has to drag Homer away from the Moes each night

My Birthday Party

On Saturday afternoon at 4.00pm it was my 11th birthday party. The people that came were Niamh, Abby, Ansley, Jasmine, Renee, Maddi, Daina. The first game we played was an apple bobbing we filled the whole bath tub with water and put twelve apples in the clear blue water. The red and green apples bobbed in the water. I won Ana came second. For coming first or second you got a whole big block chocolate. We had heaps of fun at my birthday party.

A taxi driver shot 12 people and the killed him self in Cumbria. He had killed some of his fellow taxi drivers this was very up setting. 25 were hurt and 8 of them are in critical care.